Thursday, April 16, 2015

FSF Challenge - Isolated



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This week's writing challenge
from
Five Sentence Fiction
Lillie McFerrin Writes )
is based upon the prompt:

Isolated


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie posts one word for inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.




This story is more about the prompt word than the picture...




Sanctuary


Image of woman alone - source: https://23thorns.files.wordpress.com/2014/07/alone-in-a-crowd.jpg
Image of woman alone - source:
https://23thorns.files.wordpress.com/2014/07/alone-in-a-crowd.jpg
 
     She peeked out the window from behind the curtain, looking at the busy street below, three floors down. There were so many people, but whom could she trust? As a woman passing by appeared to look up at her, she drew away from the window, steadying the curtain so her presence wouldn't be known. It's best not to take a chance, she thought. Turning her walker around, she inched toward a worn easy chair, lowered herself gently into it, then reached over to the lamp and extinguished the light.


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4 comments:

  1. I really like this. You captured the prompt.

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    1. Thanks! I really couldn't come up with anything good for the picture, so I just went with the prompt word.

      Sorry it took a while to post and reply to your comment. It's been a busy month.

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    1. Thanks! And I'm glad to see you're back writing, too!

      ( Here's the entry Tess wrote - but it was too late to post: http://writingfromthelighthouse.blogspot.com/2015/04/isolated-five-sentence-fiction.html )

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